Talk:Koori Uchiha/@comment-28955786-20161207205925

I would rant about things like an idiot, but then no one would listen so I'll just point out a few small errors. The first thing I'd say is this character is a Mary-Sue, but you probably already knew that.

Genjutsu can only slow down time within the genjutsu, it cannot slow down time in reality. While the human senses only think time is being slowed down, the body would still be normal and therefore they would have died out of malnutrition eventually. Also i f Madara could use such a genjutsu, he would have probably used it to imprison someone like Hashirama instead to save him the trouble of killing him during his final battle.

I would say that Madara never had a child and doesn't and would never have love in his non-existant heart, but then again... it's debatable, I think?

Ice Release is the kekkei genkai of the Yuki clan, I don't think any shinobi can just simply learn it on a whim or with a lot of training either.

Ice Release, Mangekyou Sharingan, Sage Mode and Frost Release? That's two strong abilities too many.

I'm not trying to insult you or anything, it's just some things I want you to know.