Talk:Oc try/@comment-5053045-20150322024033

I don't even have the words to describe how I feel about this.

Her name translates to Blood Wolf. Her two kekkei genkai are "Blood Eyes," and "Death Way." Her family is dead, and by the age of 16 she's a sannin??? Not to mention her character design.

I'm apprehensive to be kind and gentle because I'm suspiscious that there is a troll behind this.

But in the case that you are not a troll and are likely just young or new to the fandom, then, sweetie, this oc is off to a very poor start. Do you know what a Mary Sue is?