Talk:Shikomie

Okay, I like your character, but that still doesn't mean she doesn't have problems. I've found some capitalization and punctuation errors throught the article. She's a bit of a Mary Sue(overly perfect), which is frowned upon on this website and most others. Her stats are a little too high. Try lower one or two of them, give her weaknesses. Most people don't have Rinnegan, the most powerful and rare of the Kekkei Genkai, so I'd swap it with something, like Iron Release, it will make you indestructible! Don't make her control all elements, stick with one or two!!! Good Luck!!! I Luv Itachi78 10:41, March 13, 2011 (UTC)I_Luv_Itachi78