Talk:Sera-Ryuzaki/@comment-24.230.46.182-20120630181617

You're an amazing drawer. Everything looks good too. Maybe try writing more details on things, or word it differently, like her background and the different arcs. :) She seems to not be huge on being a girl... which is neat. I like how she covers her breasts to make her look more like a male that's creative!~ She can see Orochi a few times, like on a mission, or the chunin exams, but I'm glad she doesn't have anything to do with him, like a "destiny or power" type thing.


 * Her personality, you went into good detail and explained why she is the way she is and how she acts towards others, and she's not all super revengeful over it.


 * I like the fact that she isn't related to Naruto but has the markings.


 * She didn't really know about jutsus and chakra.


 * You made up her clan. (Need to explain more on the history of the clan though)


 * Has no Kekkei Genkai.


 * Has a demon, but doesn't fully rely on it, and it's not super powerful, just gives her a little boost.


 * The flaws are pretty unique.


 * Like I said, has NO history with Orochimaru, which is amazing. Thank god! xD