Talk:Mayu Uchida/@comment-4614792-20140722133206

Hello! Just came in to say I liked your RPC. She's pretty well-rounded, though a bit OP. The really vivid blue hair and death-like skin kinda make me wary. Might I suggest using a different shade of blue so that it isn't too attention catching? Flashy hair is bad on a ninja after all, unless they're seeking attention for some reason.

I'd also suggest going with a different last name. While it is supposed to be symbolic with her affinity to animals and all (I assume that, at least), it sounds silly. I'd suggest combining it with different kanji or maybe going with a different name. For example, the Inuzuka clan's name is still symbolic to their relationship with dogs ("Inu" is the word for dog, though I don't know the reading for "zuka") without having them go around being called, in English, Mr./Ms. Dog.

Otherwise, keep up the good work and keep improving your RPC! ^_^