Talk:Akami Yuhi/@comment-4721118-20120101052539

You've got a fantastic story going. I really liked how you balanced out your character with weaknesses - fire is a really common element, and it makes your character seem more real. Gaara being in character and pretty oblivious to any emotions toward him is also something I praise you on. It takes some real character development to have him really begin to look at anyone further than something that has to do with business or a demand from him. He doesn't really seem to figure out friendship. Gah, I'm rambling. Anyways, I look forward to reading more - it's a lot like a really information filled story.