Talk:Sidra Uchiha/@comment-25156300-20160712000140

Read through the whole page. Here are my thoughts.

Backstory: the main issues I saw in this was the whole "surviving the massacre" bit. Being the sister of Obito was also an issue, but you handled it well. That said, you handled the massacre fairly well too. I don't see Itachi not checking all over for survivors, but it's not too bad of a way to write it.

Story: Firstly, you should put the story after the personality and appearance. That way people can learn about her abilities before seeing them mentioned in the story arcs (just a suggestion). For the arcs, I like that you made your own "filler" arcs as you called them. I did that for my characters too. It really helps to not break canon too much. The best part is that they end like a real filler arc would (leave the story in the same spot it was before the arc). Good job with that.

Abilities: This section has the biggest issue compared to the others. I like the sin release... a lot. The whole "using the anger of others" is an interesting concept. However, I feel like she has too much when you add all the other abilities on top of it. The Uchiha-based abilities make sense, but some of the other jutsu that she got during her time around missing-nin seems a bit much. All this strength made the story arcs seem like they would have broken canon somehow, but you managed to turn them around quite well, so props for keeping the power in check. You do have good weaknesses for everything, but I just think she doesn't need the extra techniques on top of her sin/uchiha powers.

Personality: This is fine. Her excessive anger would normally be an issue, but it works for her sin release.

Appearance: This is also fine. If those colored images are of Kuroyukihime, just try to get another image soon for them. This site tries to avoid using images from other anime. (I saw you have a note about working on that).

Overall: nice job. Other than the jutsu list being a bit too much, you handled everything fairly well. There are some issues here and there, but they don't completely ruin anything, so I'm ok with them. Nice job :)