Talk:Ayuuki Misaki/@comment-26252910-20150604082257

Nice work, but I think you need to fix some of your grammar. Your tenses (past/present) are mixed up all the way through the profile. Just pick one and stick with it. I would recommend present tense for a character profile, unless your character is a background character that is already dead by the time the series start - which Ayuuki obviously isn't. =)

If you need help, there's probably someone somewhere on this site that wouldn't mind fixing it for you. ;)