User blog comment:MiokoTanaka/Requests?/@comment-24351195-20151016054006/@comment-24351195-20151017070054

Sure, I'd be glad to!

Review:

I think Mioko's personality is very believable- being spoiled, competitive, and, single-minded. I'm a bit confused with her relationship with Kanna, though. It seems like their rivalry kind of undermines their friendship(?) I like the fact that though Mioko has a crush on Sasuke, it's admittedly only for his looks and talents and not for his personality. I don't think Sasuke would fight her (or really pay her any attention), though. I really like her kekkai genkai, but as for trying to learn about Sasuke's fighting techniques, it won't help much since most of Sasuke's improvement happens during the time-skip.

I'm not sure about her background, with her being related to Naruto. Is there any more information regarding her parents? Did their disappearance affect her in anyway? Her abilities sound interesting. Just a small note: Since Mioko seems to be in the same class as most of the Konoha 11, she'd probably graduate from the Academy at age twelve.

Lastly, I'm sorry but edits aren't allowed the wiki (though people still do it anyway :/).

I really like Mioko- she's unique and I look forward to learning more about her and Kanna! Please continue to develop them :D

P.S. I'm sorry if this was in any way offensive