Talk:Kotone Uchiha

Clean up needed + a tiny bit MS
Ok ok ok the idea's all great but a) this article needs cleaning up >.< Relationships are a bit up and over the place. Also I think you should add sub-headings in background, like divide them into Childhood, Search for Uchiha, Akatsuki etc etc. Also I find some bits just a tiny winy mary-sueish, but I don't think it's in the way that much so I think you can leave it for now, since it doesn't look finished yet anyway :3 Best of luck!

xStarcandy 12:22, April 4, 2011 (UTC)