Talk:Mariko Uchiha/@comment-24131867-20131204195656

Hell there, this is Yamiga! I would like to offer you some helpful advice on your OC. But if you are offended by harsh critique, you shouldn't read this.

Firstly, your charcter being an Uchiha and surviving the masacare is a huge Mary-Sue trait, I'll tell you why. You said she was away on a mission, that is impossible. Let's think back to Danzo, who knew of the massacare. He would have simply switched/changed her mission, since he knew the exact date and since he actually ordered it. And another fact, why would she be on a mission if she is only 12. I know 12 is a genin, but you still have to pretty loosely put together. In addition, becoming a new genin, she probably wouldn't have missions outside the village the cause her to be that late coming home.

Coming back, you say she is not moved by the death of her clan after losing to many loved ones? Um, not only is that cliche, but that adds to her "mary sueness" so to speak, you should fix that.

My advice is you shouldn't make her an Uchiha, however she can still be adopted by Obito. It makes sense, and Itachi would perhaps spare her.

That's just my helpful advice though!