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For the characters, I'm not good with next gen's so I don't have much on them. What I've seen seems fine.

For jutsus, the chakra factory looks good. The infinite chakra makes sense for a sage art, and you have a clear vulnerability for it.

Plasma sounds good.

I like the duality of the solar/lunar releases. It would be cool to see a combination like how yin and yang can combine, but that would probably be too hard to explain.

I like when jutsus have some science behind them, so dry ice and glass are nice. It makes me wonder, though, what Konoha teaches their kids at the academy. I mean, one fireball and Gaara's "ultimate defense" ain't so "ultimate" anymore. :p