Talk:Uchiha Miyako/@comment-2216214-20120323214955/@comment-5053045-20120706022426

A lot of canon's are sue's. Based on the guidelines. We all know there aren't any real rules to making a Mary-Sue, but its assumed by the majority of fellow oc makers. However, canon's are instantly not Mary-Sue's simply because they are canon. I for one find it rather unfair you use that logic. You indeed have a point, calling your oc a Mary-Sue does somewhat does say that canon characters with similar traits is one. But they aren't. The can't be, they're canon.

To add on to a somewhat pointless wall of text, I have a few comments about your oc.

Her highlights are quite bothersome. They're neon. She's an excellent ninja, yet she wears neon? Its hard to play ninja when you practically glow in the dark. (You can argue that Naruto wears bright colors as well, but as mentioned previously: He's a canon. Heck, he's the main character.  All arguments are sort of overruled.  You got me there.  Just wanted to point it out.)

Secondly, even for the Uchiha Leader, I find she is a "bit" to powerful. And even though you said "Even with my secondary Skill Miyako still falls under by 3.5 points, for an Uchiha Miyako is a wimp Itachi Scores a 35.5" it still doesn't smooth it over very well. If you can show me a potential physical weakness, however, I'll take back what I said.

{I personally don't see her as a Mary-Sue. You balanced her abilities and whatnot quite well. Just these few pointers that bothered me.)

I'd whine about her outfit as well, (high-heels and what I think are fishnet stockings, not to mention more neon colors) but I'm not gonna bother. Knowing you, you'll probably find a way around it.