Talk:Sawaii Hitomi/@comment-16946061-20130908031209

I rather like this OC. There are a few iffy parts in her background and the like, but for the most part it's to the point. I feel like she's adequately developed as a character and could go on to be really popular. I like her appearance, her personality, how she advances throughout the series. The only thing I can think to really criticize is the fair lack of detail. Don't get me wrong, the main points are clearly made, but it would probably help her and the readers to know just a bit more information. However, this isn't a necessity, so I can't find anything else wrong. Keep up the good work~