Talk:Akira Kazue/@comment-25156300-20150606023510

After reading everything, the only problem areas I see is her being on Team Kakashi and being at the top of her class. It breaks canon a bit too much by having these. You haven't mentioned Sakura at all, so I assume Akira is simply replacing her. And Sasuke is the top of the class, which plays a part in both teaming him up with Naruto, and in him being seen as a prodigy.

Outside of this, I like the other aspects you have. Her personality is different enough from other characters to make her unique, and her abilities are well rounded. Even the parts with Lee and Gai are done well, though I don't think Lee's lack of ninjutsu is due to a disability. I like the crane based fighting style, and using the tree walking skill to grab opponents it cool.

Other than the earlier points, she's a good character.