Talk:Naruto Fandom: Mary Sue Test/@comment-25936981-20150111213207

Two things I think should be done to make this test a bit less bias: ^^

Changing the Japanese name thing to Asian. There are enough examples in canon to justify having non-Japanese names. Changing it to Asian would at least let OC-makers know that there is flex room when naming their OC.

The sarcastic commentary really should be removed. I get that the creator of this test wanted people to know that the whole "being tortured for having two different eye colors" thing is overly-dramatic, but it kind of tips off people  when you write "OMG TORTURED AND PICKED ON BECAUSE OF THIS BOOHOO!" that this is indeed not a good quality to add to a backstory. Obviously, the people who want an honest opinion of their character will pick this if it's a part of their character, but those who are trying to "prove something" will probably waltz right passed this when they see the satrical commentary tied to it.

Just suggestions ,of course.