Talk:Hibiki Kigiku/@comment-24132811-20131106034956/@comment-5017717-20131107110105

Ahhh--- thank you for the critique, somebody can finally tell me what I did wrong. Thank you really, hopefully I'll get it done soon.

Hmmm- her parents' occupation, I don't know about that niether... Maybe you could tell me what's wrong when you can pinpoint it out? Ah- I see.

And the relying on others part-- I originally set Kiku to the age of 13 in the first part and 15 in the second part, so I had thought of writing her relationship with her teammates with a lot of details, //but then I got lazy//. But then I realized she would be too related to the whole CANON thing so I made her older, so I have to edit that.

And really? You have to have a 8 year service and 380 missions? I didn't know that ^^ Thanks for the facts~!

//and pssshhhh my maths is crap and I hope you don't think I'm using sarcasm because I am not. :)//