Talk:Kaito Tora/@comment-5017717-20131210112320

I'm so sorry for not being to do the judging on the artwork earlier //tears

Okay-- let's see...

1) Eyes-- They seem a bit off... I think it's because they aren't the same on both sides... And maybe some pupils/highlights (that white spot of light?)

2) Ears, Normally, you wouldn't see that much of the ears // I don't know how you did your character eg: if he had really large ears. But as far as I see my classmates, the ears don't show that much. Find a few screen shots and judge.

3) Neck shading. I think it's good, but his face is actually larger than that so I think there needs to be some more shading

4) Headband- I know you want to show which village he is from, but from that point of view, I shouldn't be able to see the three stripes. Maybe only 2 or only 1 1/2

5) Nostrils- Is that how you spell it? They are a bit too far left according to your upper nose-bridge line ((@@ I have no idea what to call that line

That's about it I think! Don't take my critiques THAT seriously because I can't better really.

If you want to make your art look more Naruto-ish, do trace a few screen shots. Don't upload them online. Don't sell them. Don't claim them as your own. Just get used to the proportion that Kishimoto draws. ^^ I think it is a very good way to learn a artist's art style.