Talk:Kuroichi Yamasaki/@comment-5017717-20130818054111

A few critiques for you. ^^"

1) The picture. You might want to credit the owner / the person who made the game. I don't know if you'll do it later. But I just want to remind you.

2) It's a bit empty no? Hope you can finish it soon.

3) She can't have that many kekkei genkais. The maxium in the canon universe is 2-- which is held by Mei. If she has that many-- she's probably a mary sue.

4) In the Canon universe-- there can ONLY be 2 males and 1 female in a team (excluding the teacher) so in other words. I'm afraid Kuroichi can't be in Team 7.

5) She kinda reminds me of a female!Sasuke. That's not a very good sign.

6) I'm not sure if you can turn into a chunin in a year after graduation. I'm not sure. But as far as I know-- it's not possible.

I'm really sorry if this bothered you-- but I really want to help you and your OC. Sorry for any spellnig mistakes. ;u;