Talk:Miuka Hogosha/@comment-5053045-20121006151909

Something is bugging me about this oc's bio.

So many words....>_<

Its great that you love your oc, but excessive details makes it look rather Mary-Sue... :/

Not even the canon characters have this much detail in their bios! XD If I were you I would just dial it down a bit. Keep everything "short, sweet, and to the point."

Normally I'd advise you to separate all your info into different pages, but since this is only the 3 basic characteristics, you can't really do that. XD Your best option is to, as I said, dial it down.

And hello, Colorful mist. X3 Long time no see. ^_^