Talk:Amari Hyuga/@comment-26252910-20150702073715

Good start, but some of your wording is very awkward, and you've got a few little grammar mistakes as well. Just fix those up and it will make it a lot clearer. =)

Ooh, also, don't forget to mention that it's an AU story! (AU as in alternate universe, if you didn't know. It just means that something in the background of the story has been changed from canon - like the Uchiha surviving, as I assume is happening here since she's married to an Uchiha OC during Naruto's generation. =) Just a little warning at the top, like "Amari is [the main/a support] character in [YOUR NAME/USERNAME HERE]'s [fanfiction/role play], [NAME OF FANFIC/RP], which is an AU."

Or something like that.^^ =)