Talk:Yuuna Adachi/@comment-35391058-20180425041901

Hi,

She is a very interesting character! Great visually and very promising and interesting background.

Minor suggestions: Cut down on her mission numbers - ~1,200 missions are a lot. I know Kishimoto set the bar too high with his ridiculous databook numbers for the missions, but still 1,000+ seems a bit ridiculous... I'd cut down her D-ranked missions maybe even to zero... She comes across as a Sai type - never took an easy mission in their life. So ~100 B-rank, ~300 A-rank & 50+ S-rank (as a part/leader of a squad) seems more reasonable I think :). She seems to have been imporant to Kiri before defection so attribute "low numbers" for administrating duties in the Kiri ANBU during the latter part of her life. Also her stats seem a bit too high, but like that you made her more of a Genjutsu-using ninja! maybe add more attributes that seem to fit her more like "Swordsmanship" "Use of Ninja Tools" "Chakra Control" etc. Just a suggestion. The "Kekkei Genkai Hunter" is not a very imaginative and impressive (in terms of her reputation in Kiri) nickname in my opinion. I'd suggest to make a nickname incorporating words Huntress and Blood, or maybe even a word like Cleanser (as in she cleansed Kiri of the "dirty blood" of the people with Kekkei Genkai). BTW I very much like the whole Hunter-Nin aspect of her, incorporates the canon plot quite well.