Talk:Torei Rīchi/@comment-25156300-20160909232655

I read through the page, and I don't think there's really anything I'd say needed. You give a thorough background, which is good for a pre-gen, since most of their story is in the past. The details of it are fitting and don't bend canon in any major way (though being a pre-gen helps with that).

I've given my thoughts on the kekkei genkai on that page, so there's not much else on that. A question I did have was about the jars. Do they just fill them with their own chakra whenever they have some down time and can spare it? That's how my main character gets chakra to use later, so that's the first method that came to mind.

Overall, good character. As for polishing anything up, I'd say to just do that after some time has past. When you read over the page at a later time, you may get a few new ideas to add to it.