Talk:The Ōkami Clan/@comment-2216214-20131231021700

So since Iam the only one to stop and read instead of just throwing categories at it.

1. If your clan is going to have an element they exceed at pick one. Not five.

2. Ice is in it's self a Kekkei Genkai of wind and water.

3.This curse is a sickness and needs to be stated as such, curses are a thing in the Naruto verse and they can be sealed or even removed. A sickness is not the same.

4. With symptoms like this it is enough to cripple a ninja. Premenantly.

4.1 As a note to this I'd avoid the real life disease reference its unnessacary since you pretty clearly explain it after that using what looks like a copy/paste of its wikipedia page.

5.Your plot solution to this sickness of sealing a spirit into a sick person is cruel to both the Human and Nature Spirit. Have we learned nothing from the series.

6. In general OC Spirits and Tailed Beast are considered OP.

7. If your clan is aiming for wolf understand that amber, gold, hues of brown, gray, yellow, and green are all wolf Eye colors BUT blue is not they loss this coloring after six to ten weeks old.

8. Wolves have excellent peripheral vision and their eyes are optimized to detect motion, but that said research show that they are nearsighted and partial color blind. Take that into account before you make this ocular, since the wolves main senses are Smelling and Hearing.

9. Clarify what "develop more characteristics to that of wolves" means cause that could mean like the Inuzuka, nails, hair, and teeth. Or what?

For now this is a decent list of thing you should address.