Talk:Akemi Hōzuki/@comment-5298475-20120727205705

She's actually really interesting! I like her so far and interested in the rest of her story.A few things don't make sense though.

1. She should be in the academy for atleast a full year. Natural skill is helpful but it still doesn't make sense that she was there for less than a year.

2. "she almost immediately joined her in order to leave behind all the memories that haunted her. She later joined Akatsuki when she and Shiro were taken to the base and initiated after being defeated by two other members."

What was she doing inbetween that time for the Akatsuki to even acknowledge her? They don't randomly let people join or seek out random people. She has to do something pretty dang evil for her to be considered by them. (EX. Itachi murdered his own clan, Deidara was a terrorist bomber, Hidan slaughtered his neighbors and joined a Jashin cult. etc.)

3. The way you wrote the timing is a little confusing. The way you wrote makes it seem like she was only a ninja for like 4 years and a jounin for about 2. (I can't tell you need to elaborate) If that's so it doesn't make sense that she has THAT. EX. Baki has been a jounin for like 10years or so and he has; 694 missions: 116 D-rank, 210 C-rank, 251 B-rank, 106 A-rank, 11 S-rank.

Besides that I love her. She's very likeable and very original. ♥