Talk:Arisa Namikaze/@comment-5053045-20150406030700/@comment-26099905-20150406093922

Oh I'm not offended. She is around 10 years in the making but I asked you to review so getting offended is just silly! The black in the hair is meant to be streaks but I have this thing were I am bad at art. Very bad. As for the hair dye its because she was teased about her natural hair as a kid. For the personality I no good with words but your suggestion helps! I'm actually still working out her personality because when she was a mega sue her only personality trait was "cold and distant." For the outfits I never thought about her looking to casual for Part I, but I'm actually super in love with that outfit so changing it will have to be a internal battle. XD Her relationships and background once again lead into the fact that she used to be insatinly sueish. She used to oitrightly be naruto's twin sister lol. As for going to the Uchiha's that's something I'm still working on. I wanted a way for her to be close enough to Itachi for her to betray him in some way. That's her whole raison detre see. Naruto has finding Sasuke and becominrg Hokage, Sasuke has killing Itachi and later avenging him, and Arisa has redeeming herself for abandoning Itachi in a crucial point in his life and ultimately sasuke too. I felt that by her becoming upset by Itachi's plight she became distant enough to make Sasuke feel that she didn't care about him. Just to clear that up for you. As for her being scarred when she was 4 that is something that happened to Itachi too. She doesn't remember it perfectly per say nor does she see any actual fighting (Itachi turned a pacifisct as a child du to thr war but Arisa did not due to not having as much exposure) however I figured that because she was so close to the 4th Hokage that should have had at least some experience.

I hope I cleared some stuff up. She is still in the works mind you. Thank you for yor review it was very insightful!