Naruto Fandom: Mary Sue Test

Naruto-Fandom Specific Mary Sue / Gary Stu Test.

Disclamer: NO question on this test based off of one sole OC I have seen. It was not made to attack anyone.This test is based on the Mary Sue Litmus Test but modified to be Naruto fandom specific.

This test does not apply to AU characters or Next Generation characters and is based on the Canon-Manga plot of Naruto. Question: What is a Gary Stu or a Mary Sue? Answer:  A Mary sue/ Gary stu in short terms is a character that is either too perfect, too cliche, too unoriginal, too unbelievable for the series, a self insertion or any combination of the these traits. They are not good and despised by the majortiy of readers. Anyone can make a Mary Sue accidently and with enough critique and feedback; then almost ANY mary sue is reedemable if one is willing to change the character enough.

Question: Can you explain your terminology?

Answer: A Gary Stu is the male version of a character like this type of character. A Mary Sue is the female version of this type of character. OC stands for "Original Character" a character that a fan makes up for a franchise, so they are also called "Fan Characters." "Canon Characters" are characters that are official and exist in the actual manga; Naruto, Kakashi, Sasuke, Sakura, Ino, Shikamaru, Gaara, and Killer B are all examples. "Canon" means what occurs in the actual manga; so it cam refer to characters personalities, the sequence of events, and what exist in the manga.

Question: Okay I understand what a Sue is now, but what is the point of making a test on them?

Since Mary Sue's are uncreative and usually not well recepted writers and roleplayers don't want to have one and want to avoid making them. People take Mary-Sue test because they want to improve a character they think might be a sue but want to check or they are making sure their character doesn't come close to ever becoming a sue. If you will be upset that your character might be called a sue or refuse to change it or argue if they are called a sue they you really shouldn't be taking sue test in the first place.

Question: How do I take this Test?

Answer: Read every question on the test. If statement is true for your character or the answer is "yes", add the amount of points to your score for that question. If your answer is "well kind of" then add those points. Add your score up continuously and at the end read what the results tell you about your character and act accordingly. If It's a question with more than one part (signified by indentations) and you answer "yes" for two or more parts then add all of those points. Question: Can I leave feedback, critique, or ideas?

Answer: If you feel a particular question should or shouldn't be here, or disagree with the point system you are MORE than welcomed to leave feedback and tell me why something should be changed. I will read and re-research all feedback.

DO NOT EDIT THIS PAGE WITHOUT PERMISSION. I don't want anyone changing the question because the test called them a sue. Unless your just fixing grammar/spelling ask permission.

How realistic is the name and how does it effect characterization?
[ ] Does the Character have your name, a variation of your name, your name but more japanese sounding, a pun of your name, your nickname, any online chat handles you use, or otherwise any other name that has been applied to you in your life? [+10]

[ ] Does the name contain unnecessary hyphens, apostrophes or other punctuation? [+1]

[ ] Do they have a name that isn't Japanese. (Japanese-Sounding but not Japanese counts) [+3]


 * [ ] Does this non-japanese name have an " L," "X," and/ or"V". (Do some research people these letters don't exist in Japanese! For example, the name "Lina" would be written as "Rina" and the name "Vash" would be written as "Bashu.") [+1]

[ ] If it IS a Japanese name did you diliberately spell it wrong?[+1]

[ ] An otherwise unusual-sounding name (unusual in the character's time/place/world/clan etc.)  [+1]

[ ] Is it a pun or variation name of an existing character. (Ex. Naruko, Naruka, Sakurayu, Sisuke, Sakuke, Sasuki, Itacha, Nagata.) [+1]


 * [ ] This was done intentionally. [+1]

[ ] Is the name intentionally taken from a character of a different anime, manga, show, game, comic, book, or movie that you like [+1]

[ ] Intentionally taken from an existing person you admire or like. (Ex. Celebrities, Writers, Animators, Mangakas, Voice Actors) [+1]

[ ] A masculine-sounding name for a female character or vise versa without reason? (An example is their mother/father wanted the opposite gender child and was emotionally disturbed by having the gender they didn't want is a reason "Just Because" is not) [+1]

[ ] Involve a noun or verb not usually used as a name, spelled normally or not? [+1]


 * [ ] If a noun, was it deliberately chosen because it's related to nature, a weapon, a gemstone, darkness, or something mystical? [+1]

[ ] Chosen because you thought it had a meaning appropriate for your character?(If this is a clan name that refers to their abilities then it doesn't count) [+1]

[ ] Does the character have some cool sounding title. (You know corny stuff like "the dark-hearted fallen angel", "the masked avenger", "the warrior of justice") [+1]

How realistic are their looks and how do they effect others?
[ ] Is the characters looks based on your own or a celebrities? [+2]

[ ] Does the character look how you wish you looked? [+1]

[ ] Are they described or illustrated as exceptionally cute, beautiful, handsome, hot, or sexy etc. [+1]

[ ] Does any characters fight or squabble over your character because of xir looks? [+1]


 * [ ] Canon Characters? [+1]


 * [ ] That are otherwise stoic or very unlikely to do this? [+1] (ex. Sasuke, Neji, Gaara, Hidan, Itachi, Pain, etc.) 

[ ] Is anyone (including you) jealous of your character's looks, and/or see their attractiveness as a threat? [+1]


 * [ ] If female is it Sakura and/or Ino? [+1] (And slap your self for being Cliche) 


 * [ ] If male is it Sasuke, Neji, Gaara, or a memer of Akatsuki? [+1] (They REALLY don't care about that stuff) 

[ ] Do other characters frequently tell your character how sexy, cute, or beautiful xe is? (Parents don't really count here)[+1]


 * [ ] Does your character modestly deny it every time, refuse to believe that xe is attractive, or otherwise still not realise they are attractive? [+1]

[ ] Does your character have a great body/physique, which you describe, show, and/or illustrate in detail? [+1]


 * [ ] Despite the fact that xir eating and/or excersizing habits decree that xe should be under or overweight? [+1]

[ ] Is their body/physique unrealistic? (Ex. Huge breast but they don't have broad shoulder, big breast but a narrow waist, Biceps bigger than they should be for body mass, or otherwise not proportioned the way they should) [+1]


 * [ ] If they have breast that are two big for their body to support (Small waist and shoulders that aren't broad enough, hips that aren't wide enough) do they not suffer from back problems and the other existing medical complications that this would cause? [+1]

[ ] Do other characters find your character extremely attractive and desirable, even when xe should be completely gross and icky (EG, after battling, getting tortured, going for days without bathing or washing). [+1]

[ ] Does your character have "Fan Girls" or "Fan boys"? [+1]

[ ] Do they have eyes that change color. (Dojutsu is exempt from this) [+ 1]


 * [ ] With their mood? [+1] (And slap yourself please)


 * [ ] And they were OMG TORTURED AND PICKED ON BECAUSE OF THIS BOOHOO! [+1]

[ ] Does the character have Heterochromia iridum(each eye a different color) [+1]


 * [ ] And this doesn't detract from their attractiveness [+1]


 * [ ] And they were OMG TORTURED AND PICKED ON BECAUSE OF THIS WAAA! [+1]

[ ] Do they wear something impractical for a ninja to wear that would restrict flexability, get in the way while fighting or otherwise be difficult to fight in? (Ex. Leather, metal suit, Long or flowing skirt, Heels bigger than Sakura's, tight clothing, skirt without a slit.) [+1]

[ ] Do they wear revealing clothing. (Ex. Lots of visable clevage, A short skirt without shorts underneath, Booty shorts, A skirt with a slit without visable shorts underneath, tops that bear the midriff, muscle shirts, chest showing etc.) [+1]

[ ] Do they wear clothing that doesn't seem to exist in the Naruto Realm? (EX. Any type of brand labeled clothing such as Nike or hollister, Jeans, lolita dresses) [+1]

[ ] Does the character have neon colored hair? [+1]

Does your character have any of the following?


 * [ ] Natural eye coloration not normally found in xir race/species/clan? (Example: an Inuzuka with bright blue eyes) [+1]


 * [ ] Eyes with any other unusual qualities? (Flashing, odd shaped pupils or iris, sclera that aren't white.) [+1]


 * [ ] Natural hair color not normally found in xir race/species/clan? (EX. Uchiha with blonde hair) [+1]


 * [ ] Hair that looks "Scene" or "Emo" [+1]


 * [ ] Hair that hangs in front of both eyes? [+1]


 * [ ] Unusual feature of any other kind? (Particularly unusual/exotic birthmark, naturally occuring tattoo, natural occuring scarrification, tear color, blood color, wings, etc.)  [One point for each:]

[ ] Do they dress like a modern label ? ''[ex. Punk, Goth, Lolita, Emo, Prep, etc.]'' [+1]

[ ] Do they wear clothing that you deliberately picked from your own wardrobe or that you would like to wear? [+1]

[ ] Clothing chosen because you really wished you owned it or could get away with wearing it in public? [+1]

[ ] Clothing chosen because it makes your character look super sexy and/or badass?  [+1]

[ ] Do they look eerily similar to a canon character? [+1] (If you don't think so but others have repeatedly told you they do and you have refused to change their appearence then it counts)

[ ] Do they wear a carbon copy of of a canon characters outfit /but only a few things look different? (Ex. changing colors, adding longer sleeves, different shoes) [+1]

[ ] Do they have the distinctive feature of an existing canon character? (EX. Naruto's Wisker birthmarks, Gaara's eye circle birth marks, Gaara's love tattoo, Sakura's hair bangs, Sasuke's duck butt hair, Iruka's scar etc.)[+1]

[ ] Does the character naturally look much younger than they actually are, older than s/he actually is, ageless, or in any way not her actual age? (A 20 year old looking 16 doesn't count, and a 12 year old looking 14 doesn't count. I mean generally large gaps like a 5 year old looking 10, a 13 year old looking 17, or a 50 year old looking 30.) [+1]

Part 3: Species, Demons, and Hybrids
[ ] Does the character a species that doesn't exist in the Naruto realm or something extremely similar to these species or something with all or most of the traits of these species? (EX. Neko or similar, Fairy, mermaid, angel, witch or other magic user, werewolf,shapeshifter, etc) [+3]


 * [ ] Without reason? (Being genetically expiremented on for years is a reason."They were born that way", "it's a clan trait", "they were bit/infected" are not reasons) [+1] 


 * [ ] This species just so happens to be a vampire? [+2] 


 * [ ] And they don't have the normal drawbacks of vampires or do they have something that prevents the drawbacks? (EX. Burning flesh and eyes in the sun, being blood thirsty heathens and going insane with the lack of it, ONLY being able to digest skin and blood, being warded off by garlic/crosses/holy water/rosary, being staked in the heart causes instantaneous death, Not being able to walk on holy ground, Not being able to cross running water, not having a reflection in any mirror or reflective surface) [ Add +1 for EACH listed weakness they do not have]


 * [ ] If they are neko or otherwise have animal like ears or tails, can they "hide" them by making them invisible or retracting them into there body? [+1] 

[ ] Are they a crossbreed or hybrid of any kind? [+1] 


 * [ ] And ostracized/hated by both sides because of this? [+1] 

[ ] Are they a demon, Do they have a demon sealed in them, or something eerily similar? [+5] (there are only 9 demons in the canon Naruto-verse, the jinchūriki. NINE Demons NINE . Not ten, not eleven, not twelve, not thirteen, NINE and all nine of those spots are taken! Adding more conflicts with the canon plot.)

[ ] Is something not in the naruto realm is sealed in them? (Ex. Angel)  [+1] 

[ ] Is the character immortal? [+1] 


 * [ ] Do they angst about this? [+1]

Is the background too tragic, more tragic than necessary, unrealistic, cliche or unoriginal?
[ ] Are their parents dead? [+1 For one parent], [+2 For both parents]


 * [ ] And they for whatever reason have no other relatives to take them in? [+1] 


 * [ ] Were their parent(s) killed by a canon character? (Demons don't count here) [+1]

[ ] Did your character ever abandon or run away from there home/village/clan? [+1] 

[ ] Were they ever neglected or abandoned by their caregivers? [+1]

[ ] Were they banished from anywhere? [+1]


 * [ ] For something that's not their fault? [+1]

[ ] Were adopted by a bad person/family? [+1]


 * [ ] Was it Orochimaru? [+1]

[ ] Were they not raised by their parents for some other reason? [+1]

[ ] Were they ever abused physically or sexually? [+2]


 * [ ] By a canon character? [+1] 


 * [ ] By a canon character that wouldn't do this? [+1] (Ex. It's somewhat understandable for Orochimaru to do this. It's not understandable for Kakashi, Asuma, Fugaku or Jiriaya to do this.)


 * [ ] If they were sexually abused was it incest? [+1]

[ ] Were they ever abused verbally or emotionally? [+1]


 * [ ] By a canon character? [+1] 


 * [ ] By a canon character that wouldn't do this? [+1] (Ex. It's understandable for Orochimaru to do this. It's not understandable for Kakashi, Gaara, Asuma or Jiriaya to do this.)

[ ] Has the character been raped or tortured or expiremented on? [+1]


 * [ ] By a canon character? [+1]


 * [ ] By a canon character that wouldn't do this? [+1] (Ex. It's understandable for Orochimaru to do this. It's not understandable for Kakashi, Asuma, Fugaku Jiriaya, or Hiashi to do this.)

[ ] Was your character ever a slave, in forced servitude, forced prostitution or something similar? [+1]

[ ] Were they raised in extreme poverty?[+1] 

[ ] Were the people from your characters country/village/clan etc unfairly mean or shunning to the charcter? [+1]


 * [ ] For something that wasn't the characters fault at all? [+1] 


 * [ ] And your character still feels guilty for it later in life? [+1]

[ ] Does the character suffer from a guilt for something else in their past?[+1]


 * [ ] It's actually not the characters fault? [+1] 


 * [ ] Everyone sensible can see it wasn't his/her fault; other characters spend a lot of time trying to convince him/her of this [+1]

[ ] Is your character a member of a highly despised race, clan, village, spieces or something similar? [+1] 

[ ] Was the character unfairly bullied as a child. [+1]


 * [ ] By characters that weren't the bullying type. (Ex. Ino, Sakura, Sasuke, Naruto) [+1] 

[ ] Is the character persecuted by an authority figure (parent,kage, general, etc)out of spite, jealousy, revenge, or general meanness?) [+1] 


 * [ ] For turning down that authority figure's sexual advances?[+1] 


 * [ ] For being right when the authority figure was wrong? [+1] 

[ ] Does the character's parent's hate them? [+1]


 * [ ] For no reason, no explained reason, or no legitamate reason? [+1]

[ ] Is the character An illegitimate child in a society/clan where this is stigmatized? [+1] 

[ ] Or are they a parent of an illegimate child in a society/clan where this is stigmatized? [+1] 

[ ] If your character has siblings, is the character shunned, neglected, or abused by one or both of their caregivers while the other child/children are adored?[+1] 

[ ] Is the character a survivor of a massacre, calamity or genocide? AND/OR was all/most/or a significant amount of their clan wiped out? [+1]


 * [ ] The only survivor or believed at anytime to be the only survivor? [+1]

[ ] If your character is an Uchiha are they alive after the Uchiha Incident? [+3] 


 * [ ] Because Itachi/Tobi spared them? [+2]


 * [ ] Because he was in love with/loved the character. [+1] (Guys,Itachi killed his own lover and his parents. Love had nothing to do<with the massacre. There was noone Itachi loved as much as Sasuke and even if he did Tobi would of killed your OC.)


 * [ ] Because they "Ran away from it"? (Itachi/Tobi would of caught them. Do you seriously think all the Uchiha just stood there and no one tried to run away?)  [+1]


 * [ ] Because they "were able to hide"? (Itachi/Tobi would of found them Do you seriously think none of the Uchiha tried to hide?) [+1]


 * [ ] Because Itachi/Tobi felt pity for them them? [+2]


 * [ ] Because they were coincidently not there at the time? [+1]


 * [ ] Because they were stronger or evenly matched with Itachi/Tobi? [+3 and punch yourself in the face]

[ ] Do you ever play out the characters past to seem worse than any other canon character's? (This counts even if it's unintentional) [+1] 

[ ] Does your character have a past xe cannot remember? [+1]


 * [ ] If/when your character discovers xir past, will xe not like it? [+1] 


 * [ ] And/or discover that xe is actually someone of great importance? [+1]

[ ] Do you ever play out the canon characters to have undeniable pity for the character? [+1]


 * [ ] Characters with their own tragic backgrounds?(Ex. Gaara, Sasuke, Kabuto) [+1]


 * [ ] Characters that are rather cynical and/or hold little pity for others? (Ex. Sasuke, Pre-shippuden Gaara, Pein, Hidan, Deidara, Sasori, etc.) [+1] 

[ ] If your character has a torment-ridden, pain-filled past, do you believe it excuses xir actions, rude behavor, outburst, or angsting? [+1]

[ ] If the character does ever angst does it not ever bother people? [+1] (EX: A canon character thinking or saying "OMG Ms. Sue is always complaing about her past! It's annoying! She needs to get over it!")


 * [ ] Or if the angst does bother a character, other characters quickly jump to your characters defense and tell off the person complaining.[+1]

Parts of the characters background that are not necissarily tragic but when combined together can become cliche, unbelievable and unoriginal.
[ ] Was the character taken in or raised by or with a canon character? [+1]


 * [ ] Sasuke's family? [+1]

[ ] Is there a prophecy about your character? [+1]


 * [ ] More than one prophecy? [+1]


 * [ ] And the character dislikes the prophecy? [+1]


 * [ ] Is it that the character has to save the world/village/clan/etc.? [+1]

[ ] Does the character never have anything bad or upsetting happen to them in their past or story? [+1]

[ ] Is the character of a royal blood line? (Monarchies, Princes, Princess etc.) [+1]


 * [ ] And the character doesn't know this [+1]


 * [ ] And in line to inhert a throne or ruling position[+1]

[ ] Or if NOT royal, is the character in line to inherit leadership of a clan?[+1]

[ ] If your character is a female of relative wealth and/or high social status, does she have "generic rebellious princess syndrome?" [+1]

[ ] Is the character a prodigy by there clan/village/etc. for their intelligence or abilities? (This doesn't count if it's only the characters parents who think this) [+1]


 * [ ] And it's all natural? (Ex. The character is a prodigy for their intelligence but they never really have to read or study. Or the character is a prodigy for their abilities but they never really train that often)[+1]

[ ] If your character has siblings are they honsestly "the favorite" by one or both of their caregivers, without a good reason? (Ex. a good reason being the other child is reckless, always breaking the rules, rude, condesending, lazy, violent, mean, apathetic, disrespectful and cynical. ) [+1]

[ ] Was/Is the character loved by EVERYONE in their clan/village/etc.? [+1]

[ ] Is your characters back story unusually similar to another canon characters? [+1] (EX.1 Mariko Susana lived with a powerful clan and had atleast a relatively good life. UNTIL HER EVIL SISTER KILLED THE WHOLE CLAN ACCEPT FOR HER!!! BOOHOO!!!!!! Now she wants to seek revenge! D:) (EX.2 Gari Stuso's is an orphan. He was shunned by his village for having the 100 tailed tiger sealed in his body. He wants to gain acceptance from his village & become a kage!)

Is the character over powered, have to many abilities or unbelievable abilities?
[ ] Does the character have a powerful Kekkei Genkai or Dojutsu[+1]


 * [ ] Is the the Sharingan or Byakugan but they aren't from the Uchiha/Hyuga clans?[+1]


 * [ ] If your character is a part of the Uchiha AND Hyuga clans to they posess both the Sharingan AND Byakugan? [+1]


 * [ ] Is it the Rinnegan? [+1]


 * [ ] Is it a carbon copy of an existing Kekkei Genkai?[+1]


 * [ ] Or does it give character the ability to use other clans Kekkei Genkai?[+2]

[ ] Do they have more than one Kekkei Genkai ability?[+1]


 * [ ] 3 or more? [+1]

[ ] Can your character copy jutsu's/kekkei genkai's for any reason and they don't have the sharingan?[+3]

[ ] Does your character almost always win physical fights [+1]

[ ] Does your character have a carbon copy of a unique ability of a canon character? [+1]


 * [ ]But you try to pretend it's different because you changed it very little. (EX. LOL NO I'M NOT COPYING, GAARA IS PROTECTED BY SAND, MY CHARACTER IS PROTECTED BY ROCK / FIRE / LIGHT / DARKNESS, IT'S SOOOO DIFFERENT!!!) [+1]

[ ] Can the character control an element? (Nature transformations don't give ninjas the abilty to control an element. This isn't ATLA people, so don't have your character going up to a pond and manipulating all the water in there without it being a jutsu of some sort) [+1]

[ ] Does the characters body/physique hugely contradict their abilities? (Ex. Having a very scrawny or skinny physique but being very strong) [+1]

[ ] Was the character trained by a sanin?[+1]


 * [ ] If it was Tsunade are they OMG SOOO MUCH BETTER THAN SAKURA! [+1]

[ ] Did the character grauate the Academy at an unusually young age.[+1]


 * [ ] Become a genin, chunin, jounin, in a very short time? (Less than a year between genin and chunin, less than 2 years in between chunin and jounin) [+1]

[ ] Do they have more than one nature transformation? [+1]


 * [ ] More than 2 [+1]


 * [ ] All of them?[+5]

[ ] Does the Character use a nature transformation that doesn't exist in the canon? (Filler anime episodes don't count) [+1]

[ ] Has the character mastered more than 4 ninjutsus as a chunin or genin or lower rank, or at a young age (Lets go with under 17)? [+2]

[ ] Has the character mastered more than 4 genjutsus as a chunin or genin or lower rank, or at a young age (Lets go with under 17)? [+2]

[ ] Is the character very strong in ninjutsu, taijutsu, and genjutsu. (They should be significantly weaker in one of them. Ignore this if your character is over 30 and is great in all three from years of expeirence) [+1]

[ ] Can do a jutsu only certain canon characters should be able to do (Ex. Chidori)? [+1]


 * [ ] More than one? [+1]


 * [ ] More than 5 [+5]

[ ] Can they do a Jutsu from a clan the character doesn't belong to and the Jutsu can only be performed by those clan members no matter what?(Ex.Eight Trigrams Thirty-Two Palms)[+1]


 * [ ] More than one? [+1] 


 * [ ] More than 5 [+5]

[ ] Are they equal in abilty or stronger than any of the Sanin, Akatsuki members, Orochimaru, Kage, jinchuriki or other very strong Naruto characters? [+3]

[ ] Is the Character ever at the top of their class? ("Top 1", "Top 2", "Top Male" and "Top Female" count) [+1]


 * [ ] And they were in the Konoha 11's class? [+3] (Ino Yamanaka was at the top of her class. Not your OC. Sasuke Uchiha was second to her. Not your OC . Don't change the canon!)

[ ] Is the Character as smart as/ smarter than Shikamaru?[+2]

[ ] Is the Character as good/ better at Taijutsu than Rock Lee or Gai?[+2] 

[ ] Is the Character better than/as good with weapons as TenTen? [+2]

[ ] Is the Character stronger than/evenly matched with Neji? This also means does the character have stats equal to or higher than 25 as a genin? (This is Neji's stat number. He had the highest stats of the Konoha 11 as a genin so making it this or more is is really pushing it, since he's supposed to be the strongest genin.) [+2]

[ ] Can the character open any of the 8 gates? [+1] 


 * [ ] More than 3 of them? [+1]


 * [ ] More than 5 of them? [+1]


 * [ ] Do they ever open all 8 of them? [+1]


 * [ ] And not die (and remain dead)? [+5]


 * [ ] Do they ever open the eighth gate(of death)? [+1]


 * [ ] And not die (and remain dead)? [+5]

[ ] Is the Characters clan very powerful? [+1]

[ ] Is the Characters clan extremely attractive? [+1]

[ ] Can the character defeat large armies or groups of people on there own? [+1]

[ ] If the character is powerful do they still manage to get kidnapped or taken hostage? [+1]


 * [ ] And their love interest saves them? [+1]

[ ] Is the character completely blind and still a ninja? [+1]

[ ] Can the character read minds, have telekenisis, or other psychic abilities? [+1]


 * [ ] And it isn't a clan trait? [+1]

[ ] Does the character pick up complex skills or jutsus in a very short amount of time? [+1]

[ ] Does the character have stats ever reach 40? ( Masashi Kishimoto does his stats out of 40 which would mean the character is perfect.) [+10]

[ ] Can they heal people without medical ninjutsu? [+1]

[ ] Can they use any Jutsus they were never tought; just observed? (If it's because they are an Uchiha who has the sharingan omit this) [+1]

[ ] Does your character ever single handedly "save the day"? [+1]


 * [ ] More than once. [+1]

How do they relate and interact to the other characters?
[ ] Does the character ever have a relationship with any canon character. (Ex. Boyfriend/Girlfriend) [+1]


 * [ ] More than one canon character. [+1 for each adittional]


 * [ ] At the same time. [+5]


 * [ ] With a character that is evil, extremly stoic, or unloving, you know basically a douchebag jerk? (Ex. Sasuke, Hidan, Pre-Shippuden Gaara, Madara, Pein etc.) [+1]


 * [ ] This character is Sasuke. [+1] (Sasuke has not time for a girlfriend, revenge is the most important thing to him and he will not waist his focus on some girl. Even if he did like the girl)


 * [ ] With a character that should be dead but is alive in your story for any reason? (Ex. Minato, Deidara, Itachi, Jiriaya, Sasori, Nagato)[+1] (Ignore this question if the relationship ends when the canon character dies and if the canon character REMAINS dead)

[ ] Is the canon character they're paired with in love with them at any time? [+1]
 * [ ] With a character with a canon love interest (Ex. Asuma and Kurenai, Minato and Kushina) [+1]


 * [ ] Is it a character that is full evil, extremly stoic, or unloving, you know basically a douchebag jerk? (Ex. Sasuke, Hidan, Pre-Shippuden Gaara, Madara, Pein etc.) [+1]


 * [ ] If this character is Sasuke does he also love them in Shippuden?[+1]  (Sasuke has said all non-Uchiha are Scum and that he hates anyone who is not a Uchiha. If your character IS a Uchiha they shouldn't really be alive in the first place. Even if he could love your character[which he can't] he would not care about the love or be able to focus on thinking about her because revenge against his brother/Konoha is the most important thing )

[ ] Does the character make Naruto get over his infatuation with Sakura or make Sakura ger over her infatuation with Sasuke.? [+1]

[ ] Is there more than 1 canon character that is in love with them? [+2 for each adittional] [ ] Does the character ever have willing sex with a canon character? [+1]


 * [ ] More than one canon character? [+1 for each adittional]

[ ] Is the character ever engaged to but does not get married to a canon character ? [+1]

[ ] Does the character ever marry a canon character? [+1]

[ ] Does the character ever have a child/children with a canon character? [+1]

[ ] Are there other canon characters that have a crush on your character at any time (not necissarily in love with them)  and/or other canon characters that would like to have sex with them? [+1 for each adittional]


 * [ ] Is it Sasuke or another stoic/douchebag character? [+1]

[ ] Is the character ever adopted or raised by a canon character? [+1]

[ ] Is your character related by blood to any canon character? [+1]


 * [ ] Are they a canon characters child, parent or sibling?(half siblings count) [+1]


 * [ ] Are they Naruto Uzumaki's sibling? [+3] (NO NO NO PEOPLE. There is NO wiggle room in the canon for Naruto to have a sibling or half sibling)


 * [ ] Sasuke/Itachi's sibling? [+1]


 * [ ] If they are a canon characters child would the canon character canonly have to be very young (under 18) when concieving them for the ages to work out? [+1] (EX. Being the 13 year old son of Kakashi in shippuden)


 * [ ] Are they related to multiple Canon characters that aren't related? ( Ex. Sasuke's second cousin and Hiruzen Sarutobi's great neice) [+1 for each adittional]

[ ] Is your character liked by all the canon characters you like? [+1] 


 * [ ] Do they care for your character more than they care for their canon friends? [+1]

[ ] Do characters who criticize or don't like your character from the start like xir by the end, or at least have a grudging respect? [+1] 

[ ] Or does anyone who criticizes or doesn't like your character end up getting beaten up, humiliated, miserable, and/or dead? [+1] 

[ ] Does xe solve the personal problems of any canon character? [+1]

[ ] Does your character tell off, beat up, humiliate, outdo, or kill a character to whom you would personally like to do the same?  [+1] (Be honest. *I'm looking at you Sakura haters* I understand disliking a character but don't make your OC live out your fantasy)

[ ] At any point, does your character take over the job/position of a canon character? [+1]

[ ] Is your character placed on one of the Konoha 11's teams for any reason. (It's supposed to be 3 genin and 1 Jounin. Get over it people.) [+1]


 * [ ] Is it Team 7 / Team Kakashi [+1]

[ ] Do any of the main characters look up to your character? [+1] 


 * [ ] As a leader? [+1]
 * [ ] Do canon leaders see your character as a threat because of this? [+1]

Does your character otherwise conflict with the canon plot, canon universe and canon personalities?
[ ] Was your character Naruto's "Best Friend" at the academy? [+1]

[ ] Was your character ever friends with Sasuke in his childhood? If it's BEFORE the Massacre:[+1] If it's after the massacre: [+3] ''(He pushed EVERYONE out of his life. No one is a special exception). (If it's both before and after add both sets of points)''


 * [ ] Did this friendship make his fan girls all jealous of your character? [+1]


 * [ ] And they became mean or resentful to the character? [+1]


 * [ ] Did this friendship make another canon character jealous of Sasuke?[+1]


 * [ ] Was it Naruto? [+1]

[ ] Is Sasuke closer to your OC than he is to Naruto? (This conflicts with the canon because he considered killing Naruto because in order to improve his Sharingan he would have to kill the person he is closest to. This can't happen if he is closer to your OC.) [+1]

[ ] Was your character with Sasuke the night of the massacre? [+1]

[ ] Does the presence of the character make the canon characters not like who they originally liked? (EX. Making Naruto not like Sakura, Making Hinata not like Naruto, Making Sakura not like Sasuke) [+1]

[ ] Does your character see or speak to Sasuke the same night he leaves Konoha. (Sakura is supposed to be the only one he saw that night) [+1]

[ ] Does your character go with Sasuke to Orochimaru? (He's not supposed to let anyone go with him, he loves noone and his revenge is the most important thing. It doesn't matter if your character offers to help him with his revenge) [+1]

[ ] Or does your character Sasuke give up revenge on his brother or revenge on Konoha for your character? [+5]

[ ] If your character becomes a missing-nin do they not have a reason for becoming one? [+1]

[ ] Does your character ever join the Akatsuki [+1]


 * [ ] Even though they are quite young? (under 16) [+1]


 * [ ] VERY young? (12 and under) [+1]


 * [ ] Even though they weren't previously declared missing ninja/Criminal? [+1]


 * [ ] Was your character forced into the Akatsuki? [+1]


 * [ ] Was your character allowed into/forced into the Akatsuki even though have never done anything extremely evil that ALSO demonstrated a lot of power? [+1] (EX. Hidan's Jashinistic Activities, Itachi's slaughter of the Uchiha's, Deidara was a terrorist bomber. Be creative people random killing of random people doesn't really count)

[ ] Does the character ever become a Kage? [+1]

[ ] Is the character an unusual age for there rank? (EX. Graduated the academy at 4, Became a jounin at 9, Anbu captain at 11) [+1]

[ ] Does the character make your character otherwise make any of the canon characters go honestly out of character? [+3] (EX. Hinata being open with firey confidence, Sasuke or Neji all lovey dovey, Sasuke being Jealous, Naruto being a asshole, Sakura being less violent and/or less emotional, Ino being a total bitch, Shikamaru doing unnecessary task, Orochimaru being loving, The Akatsuki running around in their pink underwear drunk out of their mind singing the Party Rock Anthem while juggling dildos, etc)

Part 10: Personality
[ ] Is your character motivated by revenge? [+1]


 * [ ] A "completely justified" revenge? [+1]

[ ] Is the character always nice or always respectful or atleast the majority of the time? [+1]

[ ] Does your character almost always win all verbal battles? [+1] 

[ ] Is the character hot headed or rebellious but doesn't ever get in trouble because of it? [+1]

[ ] Does the character frequently lash out at authority, talk back to authority, or break the rules simply because they don't like being told what to do? [+1]


 * [ ] And does not get in trouble? [+1]

[ ] Is the character is notably witty, always ready with a sharp comeback or clever remark?[+1]

[ ] If the character likes playing pranks like Naruto, does the character not get in trouble? [+1]

[ ] Does the character frequently bash characters you don't like? [+1]


 * [ ] And no one gets annoyed or upset besides the character being bashed? [+1] (Ex. Kiba and Naruto not getting mad about someone saying mean things to Hinata, Sakura not getting mad about someone bashing Sasuke, Naruto not getting mad about someone bashing Sakura.)

[ ] If your character is openly defiant or disrespectful toward authority figures, is your character always justified and in the right? [+1] 

[ ] Are any other actions that get your character into trouble with authority always justified from your point of view? [+1] 

[ ] Do authority figures punish your character more harshly than they would have punished his or her peers under the same circumstances? [+1]

[ ] Do authority figures not punish your character when they probably would have punished his or her peers under the same circumstances? [+1] 

[ ] Is your character easily provoked to violence - but only gets into fights with characters who truly deserve the beating they get? [+1]

[ ] Your character has had a tragic past but for they are still happy/bubbly? [+1]

Does the character have any self insertion problems that were not mentioned someway in the above categories.
[ ] Does the character share your hair color, hair style, eye color, skin tone or body build? [+1]


 * [ ] Three or more of thes? [+1]

[ ]Does have share a hobby with you? [+1] (Ex. You and your character both LOVE to read or both LOVE to go running)

[ ] Does the character share quirk with you? [+1] (Ex. You both stutter, Eye twitches when your angry, You both like to go swinging from trees in the dead of night in your underwear)

[ ] Does the character wear a particular accessory you frequently wear. (Ex. the same glasses,a particular hair clip, a particular necklace) [+1] 

[ ] Does your character have political, social, and/or religious opinions or beliefs which you share? [+1] 


 * [ ] And the character frequently tells other of these beliefs and makes them known, acknowledged and justified? [+1]

[ ] Do you and your character basically have the same personality? [+1]

Part 12: Plot and Miscellaneous
[ ] Does your character ever use technology not proven to be in the canon manga naruto realm? (Ex. Cellphones, Ipod, MP3, 16bit computer, Firearms, Cars, Motorcycle.) [+1]

[ ] Is your characters whole story pretty much a love story with a canon character? [+1]

[ ] Is your character an expirement of Orochimaru that he let go? [+1]

[ ] Does your character succeed at virtually everything they try? [+1]

[ ] Can the character play an instrument very well? [+1]

[ ] More than three instruments? [+1] (Shouldn't your character worry about being a ninja instead of learning the guitar, drums and electric triangle?)

[ ] Does the character have an amazing singing voice? [+1] (And ask yourself what this seriously has to do with the plot)

[ ] Do the first plans, strategies, ideas, etc. your character comes up with always (or nearly always) work? [+1]

[ ] Or does your character bungle almost everthing, but is quickly & easily forgiven for it? [+1]

[ ] Does your character consider xir talents, special abilities, or good looks to be a curse? (A few moments or an chapter/episode of wishful/speculative thinking don't count; it must be a constant or near-constant thing.) [+1]

[ ] Does your character manage to become friends with a villain, and through this friendship cause the villain to become reformed? [+1]


 * [ ] Does the villain revert back to his old ways, but retains some bit of goodness in there heart, caused by your character committing a selfless act of some kind or their love was so pure, deep or amzing?[+1]

[ ] The character enters a battlefield or similarly dangerous situation from which s/he has been specifically forbidden by older and wiser heads.[+1] 


 * [ ] And doesn't get pulverized.[+1] 


 * [ ] And saves the day [+1] 


 * [ ] And doesn't face any consequences (ex. Imprisoment, community serivce) for his/her disobedience. [+1]

[ ] If your character is in the Akatsuki are they not chasing after any of the tailed beast? [+1]

[ ] Is the character from some new village or country you made up? [+1]

[ ] Is it a mysterious or "dark" sounding village? [+1] (EX. The village hidden in the shadows, hidden in the darkness, hidden in the demons, etc.)

[ ] Does the character know things only certain canon characters should know or things that noone should know? [+1] (EX. That Itachi was forced to kill his clan by Danzo, The truth about Naruto's Parents, Where waldo is hiding, etc.)

Part 13: Death
[ ] Does the character die tragically? [+1] (On a mission doesn't count since it happens all the time. This is like if the character jumps in front of a poor defenseless Sasuke, and they confesses their love for each other)

[ ] Did they ever appear to die but not really die [+1]

[ ] Did they make a heart wrenching speech before they died? [+1]

[ ] Did they die but had there life restored? [+1] (Clearly, if they died during the invasion of Pain this does not count)

[ ] Does anyone killed or physically harm themselves because your OC doesn't have feelings for them? [+1]

Part 14: Desuifiers
[ ] Is the character Unattractive? ( Not average looking) [-1]

[ ] Is the character overweight for the full duration of your story or atleast a significant amount? ("Buxom" or "Curvacious" or "a little bit of belly" does not count) [-1]

[ ] If female, is the character flat chested in their late teen years or older? [-1] (A character being flat chested at an age younger than 16 isn't that uncommon)

[ ] If male does the character have depleted muscle mass, or scrawny? [-1]


 * [ ] And they're older than 21 and younger than 50? [-1]

[ ] Is the character hated for a crime they did commit, and have no remorse for? [-1] 

[ ] Can the character not do one or more type of jutsu ( including Genjutsu, Taijutsu, Ninjutsu) at all?[-1]

[ ] Is your character human, 40+, and looks xir age? [-1]


 * [ ] Older than 60? [-1]

[ ] Does your character have a major physical flaw that does detract from there beauty that they can't hide easily? (ex. muscles to large, giant nose, scar on face etc. If you try to pretend that big boobs or a hot body is a flaw because noone notices their face or personality then add a point.) [-1]

[ ] Do they have a very bad habit that gets them into some type of major trouble at any point? (ex. Drinking, smoking, killing, dangerous sexual fetish etc.) [-1]

[ ] Is the character all around evil with no good at all? [-1] 

[ ] If male, does your OC have an honsetly small penis? [-1] (Ran, Fail, Jewels if you see this, that was for you! LOL ILY) *anyone else who's reading doesn't have to take this question seriously*

Results
≥0 Points

Why are you taking this? You either intentionally made an anti sue or you haven't created a character yet.

1 -10 points:

The Anti-Sue. Your character is the very antithesis of a Mary-Sue. In this category your character can mean two things.1.) You need to add more positives to the character. OR. 2.) Your character already does have enough positives and you made her/him interesting and balanced in your own unique way.

It really depends on the writer but if you scored under five you may want to wiggle some more positives in there.

11-20 points: 

The Non-Sue. Your character is a well-developed, balanced person, and is almost certainly not a Mary Sue. Congratulations!

21-34 points:

Borderline-Sue. Your character is cutting it uncomfortably close, and you may want to work on the details a bit, and tweak some things but you're well on your way to having a lovely original character. At this point level your level can very well BE a Mary sue, depending on the writer. If you are on the lower side of this you might not be a borderline sue; it really depends on the writer. Tweak a little something here or there anyway.

35-55 points: 

'Mary-Sue. ' Your character needs some work in order to be believable. But despair not; you should still be able to salvage her with a little effort. Don't give up just change up the most sueish details (for some characters it might the relationships, for others it might be the powers), then take the test again. There's still a chance you can save this character

 36-70 points: 

Über-Sue. You've got one hell of a Mary-Sue on your hands here, and it's not going to be easy to set things right. But do your best. There may be hope for you yet.

≥ 71 points:

Irredeemable-Sue. You're going to have to start over, my friend. I know you want to keep your character, but no. Just no. Immediate workover is in order.

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Written By -SweetCandySoftMelody (talk) 22:02, August 4, 2012 (UTC)SweetCandySoftMelody

FLAME ME BRING IT ON. I wan't you to, I will point and laugh at your stupid sue, and how you are representing yourself. :3