Talk:Fujikami Clan/@comment-35391058-20180425033633

Hi,

Love the concept and the execution!

A male cannot be a matriarch :) and a clan can only have one: a patriarch - a male leader or a matriarch - a female leader. I get the impression that this clan is more matriarchal and feminine and that's great - we do not have enough of that in the series nor in the clans created by the fandom. Love the Symbol by the way! :)

What made the Otsutsuki founder (nice idea by the way) decide that "Fujikami" was the right name for the clan? I absolutely love the Japanese folklore tie-in. As you may already know - all of the Otsutsuki canon characters are based on Japanese folklore/mythological beings. So that's great!

There is one problematic/confusing part though:

"Many of its known members took residence in Konohagakure following their village's destruction, though very few Fujikami clan members have survived to the present day."

Uzushiogakure was destoryed when Kushina was a child. Lets say when she was born.. So roughly 40 years before the start of the series... That is not long enough to go from "Many of its known members took residence in Konohagakure" to "very few of the clan members have survived to the present day." I hope you see what I mean 40 yeas is not long enough for a clan to die off in a safe environment like Konoha... Why not reduce the number of surviving clan members? After all their entire village was destroyed... There must have been a lot of casualties.

Again as you already know, this is all in good fun - an attempt to make you think more critically and subsequently, hopefully help you improve your creations on here. Good Luck! :)