Talk:Emiko Asanga/@comment-4614792-20130401140734

Just finished editing this. Phew, that was a lot of work.

I have to say, I find your OC really interesting, and she has a lot of potential. However, she has so many traits that make her border into Mary-Sue that I don't even know what to begin with. I won't say anything, though, because I think Shadowpuppy270343 already covered most of it.

I do hope you'll work on her and improve her in the future. ^_^ And I'm sorry if I got anything wrong on her profile...-.-'