Talk:Hitchiro Shanoki Hatake/@comment-25413768-20141020053632

You need to take all the art you did not draw yourself or get drawn for you down. This is a form of theft and is really unfair to the artist who spent their time and energy making the original pieces.

Also, she's very overpowered with the ability from her father (which would not genetically pass over to her realisitcally) and the ability to control jinchuriki...not even sure how that would work. But that is even less likely than somehow getting the Sharingan. The jinchuriki are the humans who have the tailed beasts, not the beasts themselves and your character would be hard pressed to summon say Naruto or Killer B.

Also, Itachi being her past lover...what age were her parents when she was born? Becuase, Itachi should be dead or waaaay too old for her.

And it's highly impossible for her to be jonin level at age 7, even if Kakashi is her father that's not a genetic trait. She might be above average, but that is just too unrealistic when paired with the rest of her information.

Overall, shes in mary-sue territory and could use some balancing out. Though, right now I'd like you to focus on taking down the stolen art.