Talk:Vitany Hatake/@comment-26252910-20150608004404

Hiya! Don't worry about the rough start, Inibi Uchiha, everyone has them sometimes. =) Maybe try taking the Mary Sue test on this site, I know it really helped me. Also, I suppose it's not such a big deal really, but there's no letter 'V' in Japanese, so you might get some criticism for the character's name. Usually 'V' sounds are written as 'B's. Anyway, just keep working at it. You'll probably find it gets easier as you go. =)