Talk:Akira Kazue/@comment-27797386-20150606190453/@comment-27797386-20150607051847

16crisps, your idea sounds really interesting, and I don't see any problem continuing it, but you have to keep away from  cliché and I think that is the hardest part in developing your character. However, everybody uses  clichés from time to time, but if that happens, you can work more on that   cliché  part, in order to get it right, to have a pleasant aspect. In rest, if you continue your ideas, I think it will be a good story and OC. :)