Talk:Sawaii Hitomi/@comment-10651324-20130610000222

i have 2 things to say.

1st- how do you do the art you put up on this page because it looks like it could really be in the anime!?!

2nd- i really like your story and the way you involved her is amazing but the only thing i what to say is that when you do something like this please keep the character in character if you know what i mean. like Sasuke, he normally doesn't care about most people and i really don't think that he would over his body to keep her there. by watching the anime & reading the manga i can at least determain that this is something he probably won't do. don't get me wrong i think you did an amazing job on this and i would like to see more, i just want to give some advice!

Xu^