Talk:Naruto Fandom: Mary Sue Test/@comment-24015805-20131005190427

Etsuko scored 7 for having been in an aranged marriage at one point with Hidan but having it end when he left the village, She left years after for revenge, thinking Hidan had killed both their Sensei and third teammate. She joined the akatsuki and even if she once was a loud-mouthed child obeys orders without complaint, unlike Hidan. The fanfiction is mostly Humor, though it starts off seriously it ends with Hidan and Etsuko finding their Sensei joined Orochimaru and their third teammate roams around without aim and is, in fact, alive. The one thing that i don't know if it makes her get classified as a mary sue is the fact that she's inmortal (a jashinist, too).

Can anyone tell me what I can fix?