Thread:Miss Misfits/@comment-37511870-20190405162115/@comment-32296239-20190412023105

Sorry, I only re-read the background so far. I'll read the whole thing tomorrow but let me tell you I can see a huge improvement in the background. You managed to explain properly where Kiyomi's family is from, what did her parents do and what was her relationship with Haku's family. The fact you explained why Kiyomi was mad at Sakura with the Sasuke thing tells us a little bit of her personality which is great.

I personally don't think the Chibi thing is a big trouble, you can let it be. Also I'm sorry but I don't know any good translator, I mean I knew a few but all translate things wrong when they don't get the meaning (which happens a lot). And with the gammar thing, I'm not even a native so I can't really talk about it.

I'll carry on reading this tomorrow but so far congratulations!