Talk:Sawaii Hitomi/@comment-24.11.184.45-20130105181431

okay some of her story doesn't make a whole lot of sense and in cases she sounds mary-sueish not to say that that's the case I could be wrong (if I were to her set in certain situations than I could probably be more accurate but parts of this discriptin is scetchy and inconsistant (contrary to it's self) the way you describe it Sasuke goe's completely OOC (he offers to give up his body? when his goal is to kill Itachi and revive his clan how's he going to do that with out a body?) now Sawaii sounds decent I'd just like it to a bit more spicific so I could truly determine whether she's a sue or not. *sigh*