Talk:Sachiko Tora/@comment-25922792-20150105234428

I'm going to be honest so I'm sorry if this sounds bitchy,

Only Karin and Suigetsu along with Jugo and Sasuke are the members of Team Taka. If you're aiming for canon, you shouldn't change that as it takes the intention of the "basic platoon" meaning, the largest size a team can be to travel unnoticed, away from the intended requirements Sasuke wanted. Your OC's addition would jeopardize that and Sasuke would not want to take that chance, no matter who the person is/was.

If I remember correctly, Sasuke and Anko are the "only" people with the "curse seal of heaven" and your OC wouldn't be of much interest as Orochimaru had Guren for the crystal release already then loses interest in her as well the crystal release when Sasuke is is in his possession. Your OC would just be to insignificant to qualify for his tastes when you consider his true goals.

Guren is the ONLY canon character who should have the kekkei genkai of crystal release just like Konan should be the only one with her technique, and Karin the only person with Mind's eye of the Kagura. We know none of her family to provide ties to her in any way and Kishimoto made her the only person for a reason as well as you copied directly from the wikia of Guren and replaced "guren" with your OC's name.

Your stats are way to unbelievable. Even Sakura who trained to obtain the enourmous chakra control and strength of Tsunade has a reasonable stamina and strength of 3 as well as your OC shouldn't be as smart as Shikamaru or a kage non the less... It's just not believable... Even my OC who is a jonin and has very high ninjutsu taijutsu and speed stats still rests at an average of 27 points total.

And no matter what kind of prodigy Sachiko is, she wouldn't be able to go toe to toe with Kakashi at the age of 14-15, I'm sorry, but there's no person in the canon who could be that good at such a young age except Shisui and Itachi as far as I know of the canon knowledge I have.

Sasuke was the ONLY person fighting Deidara, Sachiko shouldn't be there, please don't try and change the canon of a major story event as well as Sasuke doesn't care about anyone enough to give someone CPR, he only care about getting to Itachi and keeping himself alive and using the useful team members while tossing aside anyone who no longer proves useful.

As for her personality, Sasuke wouldn't fall for the puppy dog eyes, nor would any other hardened criminal so it can't "always work".

Anywho, I'm sorry if this sounded bitchy, but I'm not going to sugar coat it when things like this should be fixed if you're aiming for legit canon. If you're not, then do what you want.

Have a wonderful day. :3