Thread:Miss Misfits/@comment-37511870-20190405162115

Hey, sorry to bother you, but I was wondering if I could get your opinion on my OC, Kiyomi Yuki? I'm asking for your help because you seem to know how to write good OCs and I'm slightly worried she's getting too close to becoming a Mary-sue. I'm sorry if I'm coming off as annoying, it's not what I'm trying to do. Thanks! 