Talk:Ace Korimachi

Ok so if no one else is going to say it I will -GARY STU- You need to work on this its so over powered its insane. ''So 6 Chakra types, all of which are unknown to the naruto verse, and one chakra type unknown to even your oc's self. A mallable metal sword that can't break, mealt, or freeze and shatter, and on top of those it can't be stolen. All of that then on top you throw Omegatri a custom K.G. that allows the user to create, transform, destroy, and teleport anything to any location of their desire, being able to view chakra, the movement of others and storing weapons in pocket-dimensions. '' Iam reading all this and it only gets worse I can't see how anyone wouldn't spot this as a -STU- even before you get to God like stats and never aging and limitless regeneration. I offer you this advice take it down trash it and start over witha new character that has one or two special abilties and some real weaknesses, then repost cause I don't think this when one is salvagable.