Talk:Sarina Tomoe/@comment-76.28.140.255-20130320110154/@comment-3034030-20130320160428

Hi there! ^.^

Before I start, I wanted to first thank you for taking the time to comment on my OC's wiki. I really appreciate it. And don't worry about the constructive criticism thing. I'm not who would get upset about some helpful tips or helpful advice. (That's how I see crticism) I am one who takes criticism to heart and account, because I want to make my OC's even better. So for you to offer to me makes me feel that I can improve on my OC. So I thank you for that.

Sarina's wiki is incomplete as you can see. I made it when her bio was still in the works and I have yet to get around to finishing it. So her life story is currently being worked on and hopefully you guys can see her complete story soon. ^^

Now, let's get started, shall we? ^.~

1. I understand where you coming from with the Uchiha Clan and let me first say this. The story is set in an AU timeline in the Naruto Universe and it's somewhat of a blend of timeline and next-gen story, so I'm not really following the canon storyline for this particular fanfic series that I'm writing. But I am well aware about the massacre and Sasuke, Itachi, and Tobi being the only Uchihas left. ^^

2. Both the energy manipulation techniques and flight techniques are still a WIP at the moment and neither of them are Kekkei Genkai. They are just techniques known for the clan. (I try to steer clear from making Kekkei Genkai, because I can't really make it work) For right now, I'm slowly working my way into fixing up the clan and the techniques. It's a possibility that I might even change the abilities into something more practical, so it's not entirely set in stone just yet. But I will do some more research in order to complete it and I will update her abilities as soon as I can. As the flight technique, I actually have a decent way how that is possible and that's still a WIP. Unlike Ohnoki's, how the flight technique will be done is that a person would have to go through mulitple training regimens in order to gain that ability.

So for the moment, I'm still trying to work out the finishing details for her and complete her bio as an OC.

Thank you so much for listening, for the critique, and giving me advice. ^.^