Talk:6 Nerves of Life/@comment-25156300-20150306135556

I had meant to read through this earlier, but didn't have time. Sir Aether is right, this is a well put together technique. It is very detailed which we don't usually see in techniques.

Beginning - The effects are realistic, since it's stimulating a nerve.

Rotation - Good drawback for using it. (same with the later nerves, too) Helps prevent it from being too over powered.

Breath - The lack of O2 is an interesting drawback and it's good that it's not as damaging as the others. (he'd die too soon)

Transport, Control, Life - All three of these sound very similar except for the drawbacks. Is this correct? If so, I don't think you need to repeat the aura becoming armor and bio-electricity. Or at least reword the Control and Life ones, so it doesn't sound like it hadn't already happened with the Transport nerve.

I like the overall progression of the aura and bio-electricity with each nerve. I would have said something about the Super Sayian theme, until I saw that it was an inspiration for it.

Oh, and you have a typo. It says "control" under the "life" nerve.

My only problem is the "faster than light" part. It doesn't seem realistic (even in a fictional story). I'm not sure how Minato's technique compares to real world speeds, to say the last nerve is faster than sound or something, while still being faster than the previous nerve. What about faster than Swift Release? or is Minato faster than that?