Talk:Tammy Sarutobi/@comment-24093362-20140516235140

Yolo :)

Just saying, but maybe changing your OC would be better. She has major Mary Sue traits.

My OC is also from the "Real World." Maybe you'd like some help?

http://narutooriginals.wikia.com/wiki/Rukia_Ryoka  You can use my OC and get some ideas on how to make a character from the "Real World." and not make hera Mary Sue :)