Talk:Naruto Fandom: Mary Sue Test/@comment-26252910-20150328124312/@comment-25155057-20150328155337

I'd say the first thing would be to change the self insert part. We've all been there before, but just think on changing a few things that may be closely related to you(Like birtdates, appearence, Clothing choice, etc.)

The fact she replaces Sakura would be a big issue, unless this is an AU. No matter anyone's opinion on the kunoichi, she is infact the main girl. Changing a major part in the timeline alone makes it easy to note an OC as a mary-sue. I suggest creating an OC team that may double-up on missions with Team 7.

I like the part about fearing to loose her humanity, and that would interest the ANBU. The age seems okay, just don't make her a captin at that age. I also like her using Taijutsu most, as many mary-sues use Genjutsu like a Sharingon-Renningon-Byakugon combination.

I'm not the best with advice, but I hope this helps! :)