Talk:Naruto Fandom: Mary Sue Test/@comment-26252910-20150329034235

Thankyou so much to Kasumi-Katsuki630 and KusaNin for your advice! About the "self-insertness", I'm not really sure how else to change it. She's already different to me in a few ways that you mentioned - birth date, appearance and clothing choice - so what else can I change? I do want to keep the personality the same as my own, because I'm using my own mind as a basis so I know what decisions she would make in different situations. I'm not sure I could write a totally different personality and have it be realistic! =)

And with Sakura, I really do want to have Asuka on Team 7, but I am planning to bring Sakura back later as a non-field medic-nin. Do you think that would work? My story does cover Asuka's childhood in the first few chapters, so Sakura's absence is somewhat explained; it's not just in my head. =)

Thanks again for your help! =)