Talk:Fuyuki Azami

Hello, this is xStarcandy :)

You're character isn't an extereme mary-sue. I do see some gentle traits here and there, mainly in relationships with others (not talking about Suigetsu being her lover). It does quiet seem that everyone either likes her or are neutral to her. Her appearance is a little bit concerning too, there are lots of different colours and details; if you look at Naruto characters they are usually 'colour-themed', eg Ino= purple, Sakura= pink, Sasuke= black&white, Naruto=orange, Kakashi= grey/black etc etc. I think that this could slip, so I wouldn't worry too much about this. I say add a little bit more traits to the personality, and of course give us a background story :) You can keep the bit about the dead parents, but make sure it will actually have some kind of twisty plot to it (reasons why, and why did she survive). For one of my OCs (not on the wiki yet) I used the original plot from Naruto; there was a lot of prejudice against blood-limits in Kirigakure, so I fixed this into the background and came out with a rather neutral plot.

Best of luck, keep up the good work! Write if you need anything.