Talk:Shiori Ōkami/@comment-5298475-20120803135135/@comment-5359783-20120803154407

Thank you for your advise, and I will admit that there are some qualities which sound like Shizue and do plan to change them. I will probably have one dominant last name as it is the most common with my OC's.

And I will also explain the curse in more detail, I'm just writing ideas from my head at the minute so I will definitely change and modify them. But thank you for your thoughts about it, it truly means a lot. If you recommend how I should explain the curse in better depth then I'm happy to take any constructive criticism.

Finally, I do agree that her name isn't Japanese, I do plan on changing it as well as her brothers name.

Thank you so much again for your time and your comments, it means a lot and will truly help me develop my OC.