Talk:Yukie Shizuko

Hi :) I believe you asked me to 'scan' the article? This is an excelent character. You have balanced everything out very well. There are Sue-traits, but they are neutralized by good ideas and original traits. The only thing I would say is that you as a writer should be a little bit more careful when writting the articles. I hope that you don't mind, I have edited some of the spellings (of course I haven't changed the actual text! Just the spellings.) I hope to see more development on the OC soon, and hopefully some artwork! :)

xStarcandy 17:01, January 3, 2011 (UTC)