Talk:Ayaka Chouwa/@comment-5053045-20120802234625/@comment-174.107.73.46-20120803053103

Yeah, but any good writer would know that you have to hint the reader towards these things: not add more and more and more detail. Let them infer on their own. It just looks bad if it's nothing but pointless detail. You have to focus more on the big picture. :P Well...that's how I see it, at least. The "bit picture" thing however is a basic writing skill. If you want something to describe, don't get so detailed. Give clues. It's more fun (and easier to read) for the reader to guess at it rather than simply being told everything. --Shadowpuppy270343