Talk:Shiori Nara/@comment-35391058-20180424025747

Hello,

Shiori seems to be an interesting character. She has potential! Unfortunately the wording of the article is quite messy so I hope you don't mind if I list some suggestions:

In her background part try to write about her relatives and her relationships with them. What made her feel that way about the Naras? Try to list more facts than descriptions, it's more effective that way :). Use facts in the descriptions of her relatives and her relationships with them as well. Introduce as many characters into her life as you need! No character is complete on their own. Since we already have the basic understanding of the Nara Clan abilities and her appearance through the photoes you should focus on her background and personality to make her stand out. Also some unique abilities or battle strategies/habits would be nice! It does not need to be gradiose! Use a bit of imagination: For example Kakashi always uses a clone for his first attacks to learn more about his opponents. Use something along those lines.

Good Luck! If you need some help with wording or ideas I'd be happy to help! :)