Talk:Yoko "Izayoi" Minesaki/@comment-124.168.125.196-20110704020646

Stats: Having a total of 27 is unreasonable, especially if that's their genin skill (Which is what it looks like because their is only one row). It would be more appropriate for her third set of stats, but not her first.

I also suggest you read over your writing, you seem to have skipped over a few words or placed the wrong word in a few sentences.

Also her story seems to stray really far from canon, even going to lengths of centering it around Yoko and her on-off love for Uchihas. Just be careful about overpowering Yoko and you might want to rethink her past, having her lose her family and gain amnesia is fairly common and cliche.