Talk:Momoko Sora/@comment-7340329-20140514191414

Well this isn't going to be much of a critique.

Her background is well thought out. I can't really find a problem with that. And her story doesn't any main canon events, so there isn't really any need to talk about that., and her personality isn't bad (Can't really see how I'd critique a personality xD) Plus I bet everyone else who critiqued Momoko has given you enough info on these.

So for her abilities: I feel like you've placed unnessesary skills on this page. Such as for genjutsu; You said she only see when she's placed in one.If that's it then you should just put it in other skills. And in kekkei genkai, that whole thing should go into nature transformation since it's not a kekkei genkai at all. You also said she can't use wood release, if that's true then you don't need to put that in this page at all. And all you said for her skill is that she can use techniques and has a affinity. I feel like you should explain her proficiency in using techniques, and her skill in using them. Go deeper in her skills to let us learn more about her.

That's pretty much it for what I've got t say :P