Talk:Ryu/@comment-26252910-20150609032203

Well, you've done a better job of oc-girl-in-Akatsuki than most, but I'm still a bit doubtful that they would just accept her without her having actually done something to harm the village or earn any sort of reputation as a missing nin, no matter that she is close to another prospective member. They would probably just think she was a spy for Konoha. Not to mention, the Akatsuki is for S-rank missing-nin only, and I'm afraid that the skill level you've given her doesn't really reach S-rank.

Also, unless you can provide a concrete reason for her Akatsuki uniform to be so skimpy, it really drags down the overall concept into Mary Sue territory. Just something to think about. =)