Talk:Sayuri Yamisatsu/@comment-5335468-20120803153653

Not bad. She is very well thought out and I give you credit for that. ^^ The only problem I ran into was the fact that she is part of Akatsuki. That is considered a Mary Sue trait and is very irritating. I don't mean this in a disrespectful manner; I am just giving a critique. ^^ I had this problem before when I started to develop my character, and I am still fixing some traits on her now, but having her in Akatsuki is not a good road to take. :) Hope you didn't find me rude. :3