Talk:Naruto Fandom: Mary Sue Test/@comment-26994989-20151003073509

My OC, Uzume Uzumaki, got a 6, which is a good thing, but I feel like she's missing something.

I gave her a point for being a part of a powerful clan (Uzumaki). She got two more points for being able to use three chakra natures (technically only two, though). Another point for being related to canon characters (through being an Uzumaki; toyed with the idea of being the great-great-grandmother of either Nagato or Karin but didn't put it because it seemed Mary-sueish). I also gave her two points for suffering from a past guilt (being the reason her father had to retire from being a shinobi) but it technically wasn't her fault (technically it was Izuna's but she was being inattentive during a battle).

I know a lot of people are wary of Uzumaki OCs but I wanted to try making a believeable one so I'd like some feedback on her. (Please forgive the lack of pictures on her page if you do take a look at it; I'm unable to draw her at the moment.)