Thread:Miss Misfits/@comment-37511870-20190405162115/@comment-37511870-20190411235920

Alright, I think I'm finished with the corrections.

What I did not agree on was Team 11 (if you were talkiing about the Konoha 11)

For Kiyomi's new nickname, the explanation is in Trivia.

I think I fixed everything else. If I did not fix it, I probably just fogot about it or did not have enough time.

Now for the Chuunin Exams, I was kinda rushed so, I'm sorry if it's not any better or worse than before but, if that is the case, this is the reason why.

Then there is the personality. I did NOT intend for Kiyomi to be a fusion of characters. I didn't realize until you pointed it out. I was having a lot of trouble trying to figure out were to start so I was wondering if you could help me make Kiyomi's personality more original, if it's okay with you, of course? But I did change some things, so I recommended you should still read over it and make notes on it, as well as some suggestions for were to start. Thanks!