Talk:S/@comment-30759007-20161216182358/@comment-4558186-20161216193522

This actually isn't bad for a first OC (especially compared to my first 5 years ago). Though I would recommend to avoid directly copying and pasting stuff (save generic abilities) from other wiki's if possible (i'm looking at you last quote). Otherwise, your character isn't too bad so far.

Also i would recommend to learn how to mess with the source editor. It looks confusing as hell and takes a while to learn, but it is best way to edit stuff (mainly the infobox).