Talk:Rei Kiiraku/@comment-5602135-20121106222947

It's looking good so far! You do have a lot of grammar errors, but I got through it just fine.

But I have a question. Shouldn't the background be the character's past before they are actually apart of the plot? Some of Rei's background sounded like her role in Part One.

I like her outfit! It looks reasonable (compared to some I've seen...) and stylish! ^^

Keep up the good work~