Talk:Akurei Kotodama

Scaaan :D
I scanned it. I dont' see her very sue-ish, and well done on the past. Maybe you could open a spare page about Rin, like who he was and why did he take the family down. Also do a little tiny clean up on the article; put background fist and then appearance. Also, if you could please, I know it's a hastle but please try when you have a bit of time, to clean up the links you gave. Try to get rid of the lols and other chat-style phrases in the article :3

Other than that, I think it's all good and shiny. Well done, keep the great job up! <3

xStarcandy 18:21, April 5, 2011 (UTC)