Talk:Ekaterina/@comment-4612993-20131204214327

She is rather interesting, but she could use a little work,

For the Naruto series Jashinism teaches nothing short of death and destruction in battle, Hidan had to pray for forgiveness when he couldn't kill theTwo tails, if she saves people who are cursed then she is contradicting what Jashinism is in Naruto, I would deffinately change that. And I think for the part about Hidan killing his parents, I would be sure to add his reason for that and leaving the village, he was disgruntled with his village and pretty much slaughtered his neighbors because he has the idea that ninja are supposed to kill and he didn't like the fact that his village had become a tourist site.

And the part where she sucks the life out of him messes with the cannon, Hidan is immortal, he is the only Jashinist to survive the experiments that gave him immortality and only a select group of people know where he is buried and her personality doesn't really fit her actions of pretty much killing her brother, if she's so positive why would she suck the life out of Hidan? the killing Hidan really messed with cannon because his status of incapcitated leaves him opened to be revived, in fact the Edo Hidan was just a clone of the original, so he isn't dead.

Your OC has potential, she just needs a little tweaking, she would have her powers taken away for using them to contradict the religion by saving people that were cursed. Not many Jashinists were in the series, Hidan was the only one and it is assumed that he is the only immortal one.

If I were you I would take about an hour or so to look into Hidan and Jashinism on the Naruto wiki if you haven'talready, it has some info in it that isn't mentioned in the anime or manga.