Talk:Mikura/@comment-44633888-20191209192646

Much does not make any sense.

The Rinnegan .. aha. I hope you know what the conditions are given to get those eyes or? Who exactly is the father?

When exactly did she talk to Itachi for the first time? Wherever he was so small? If so, then it makes no sense. They want to be the same as other people ... (Sasuke is still a cute little baby) so she would be one too.

How exactly did she react to Itachi's death?

She pretends to be a mission to meet with Itachi. 1. You can not leave the village without good reason 2. Itachi would get the information he needs for himself.

So what did she do with Sakura? Did she kill her?

if yes, congratulations she is a criminal.

And I would not try to touch Sasuke in her place.

1. Would he tear her in the air?

2. Itachi has died for him and the village and thus he would have died completely in vain.

much is Mary Sue.

1. Why should Itachi specifically want her to join the ANBU?

2. Itachi would never be at the time (supposedly she should be 12 13 in the first part) complimenting a child, especially since he had other more important things in mind than girls.

Well then...

Writing a little differently and less Kleschees would make the story better.

So I see a better version of a Mary Sue.