Talk:Kyrgyzishi Yuriko/@comment-5053045-20130826224104

To start, this is a very interesting character. I like the originality, I guess I could say, of her concept.

However, I've got some points I'd like for you to take another look at.


 * Her name. Yuriko is fine. In fact, it is a very pretty name. Her surname, "Kyrgyzishi", however.... I'm not sure where you were going there with that. I'm not even sure how to pronounce it. I highly recommend using Japanese-styled (or, Romanji) names only.


 * I've noticed she's got quite a lot of affinities for Nature Release. Technically one should only have one affinity,  whereas  the others would just be lucky follow-ups that come with hard training.


 * If you're going to give her 3+ nature types, I don't think she should be having a kekkei genkai. Especially not more than one.

Aside from all of this, she's got quite an interesting background. Her outfit is very unique and cool, and I have personally found it to my liking~! Well done. :3


 * One other random note: The picture you used to describe her Red Fist: Field of Divination looks an awful lot like the Byakugan... Coincidence?