Talk:Mitsuki Kokoro/@comment-2216214-20120620080945

As for this OC it truly does need some Character Devolpment expand on your back story, maybe avoid demons, and Canon character references in discribing apperence. Another note is your mission compeletion rate is alittle backwards there is no way for anyone to have only done 4 D Rank missions and then go on 216 S Rank. As for consulting your mom maybe she should create a wiki account repost this and defend it herself.