Thread:Shadowpuppy270343/@comment-37511870-20190126225420

Hi! Sorry to bother you, but I just want your opinion on my OC Kiyomi Yuki. If you can, I would really appreciate it if you could let me know what you think of her and how close you personally think she is to be a Mary-Sue because I haven't received any negative feedback or anything, I was just curious to see if I was taking her in the right direction and, if you can, I want to know what I can to make her a better OC, so a few suggestions is all. Thanks! 