Talk:Alice Uchiha/@comment-25156300-20191227214226

Overall, Alice is a good character. It helps that she is older than the main Naruto kids, and a relationship with Kakashi doesn't mess up the canon too much.

The only real issue I see is the Uchiha Massacre. It's not easy to make a believable survivor, since Itachi would have killed everyone except Sasuke, without question. However, Itachi just allowing another character to live is still a common route people go for their Uchiha OCs, even though it isn't a great way to play it out. It doesn't completely ruin the character, but for the sake of critique, that would be the main spot I'd say to look at.

I like the Mangekyō abilities, but I don't think you need to treat the one ability as Ice Release specifically. The Mangekyō gives a different ability for each eye. For Alice, one is the hair shocks and the other is the snow shield. I think you can just say she freezes the air around her to form the snow/ice shield, instead of saying she gains Water and Wind Releases. It's a bit too much for one eye to flat out give a completely different Kekkei Genkai.