Talk:Sarina Tomoe/@comment-76.28.140.255-20130320110154

hello while i think sarina is gorgously made and is cute and the story is alright i hope you dont mind a little criticism this isnt to be mean or anything just expressing opinion and yes i know its a fanfic and anything can happan but im just putting it into an account plus i dont mind the fact if sai or karin somehow got together and had a kid i mean its crack pairing nothing wrong with that again this opinion based criticism so dont take offense

1. how are there any uchihas still around? i mean uchiha characters are difficult to create and use as a character because really they all died out in the original storyline, and in the canon it clearly says all the uchiha died out except for sasuke itachi and tobi..to me it doesnt make sense that there are more uchiha alive after the total eradication of the uchiha clan not to mention it throws off the story

2. the energy chakra and the flight techs while i do find it an interesting idea it just needs to be worked on thoroughly like is it a hidden jutsu or kekkei genkai? because if you remember the samurai can do it two but chakra cant be seen by the normal eye unless its like how the samurai did it and used there weapons as a conducter for there chakra blasts. or is it more like the rasengan? it just leaves alot of questions and as for the flying thing..i think it needs an explination outside of how its done because really its still confusing on how onoki flys but i digress

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