Talk:Namiko Shizuka/@comment-26252910-20150702075833

Such a sweet love story!! Bittersweet, but still... ;) I have a soft spot for boy love, it's just too adorable!!! And you're doing great with this, despite English not being your first language. There's a few odd wordings here and there, but I was able to understand it just fine, so it's not really a problem.

One thing that stuck out to me though was where you've written "evocation animals." I guess it would be hard to translate that properly from another language, but in English we call them "summon animals" instead. Hope that helps.^^ =)