Talk:Kira of the Akatsuki/@comment-7340329-20150228194355

So, he's a nextgen oc? Because Shikamaru promised Kurenai that he'd be her daughter's sensei but yo didn't mention her once. I also just can't seem to see how a son of Deidara and Konan could be so strong xD

Also, how'd he get Time and Ice Release? Also if he has Ice release he needs to have Wind Release. And if he killed the sage and absorbed his chakra then shouldn't he only have Sage Mode for a limited amount of time? Like 5-10 minutes? Also the White Eye thing that slows the heart... That seems random and not something that I'd ever see possible in Naruto. Ît really doesn't sound like something he would need at all. I'd take it out (I speak from experience) xD

But I love how he's a next gen oc and crap! All of my ocs are nextgen too and I love them much more than ocs in current gen. It just feels like placing an ocs in events. Never really felt like that is original xD

And the mention of the Akatsuki. Is it like a new Akatsuki? And what's the Akatsuki village? Is it Akegakure? And I'm a little confused on how the Sacred Summoning works. And Time release. I just would like this page to have more info and organized better for his skills since there is barely any explanation on it.

And I'd love it if you could take a look at my ocs. To compare the whole next gen thing! ^^