Talk:Mayu Uchida/@comment-4614792-20140724171954

On Nxf11rocks' comment about Maya being OP, (sorry to adress it here, but I couldn't find a reply button of any sort and there's no PM system) having 4 chakra natures is a start. In Naruto canon, mastering 2 different chakra natures is a chunin to jonin level feat, and not one many accomplished (excluding, you know, OP main characters). 3 or more natures indicated someone with kage-level power, i.e. Mei Terumi, the Third Tsuchikage, etc.

Second, learning and being able to do Summoning: Impure World Reincarnation, is just...no. It's a forbidden kinjutsu, and for good reason, and to my knowledge the only people who know how to do this in-manga are Orochimaru, Kabuto and, of course, Tobirama. (I could be wrong on this though, since I haven't caught up with the manga.)

Third, the sucking out affinities (a la Dementor-style) ability? Very OP. That alone would put her on around A-Rank level, at the very least. I'm comparing this to Kakuzu, who has similar abilties, albeit, you know, having to take hearts instead of kisses and being a walking Frankenstein's monster, and he's an S-Rank level missing nin.

The medic nin part on it's own was okay, but together with the above stated really drives her into OP territory. Hell, I'm pretty sure that Tsunade, named as the shinobi world's strongest medic nin, only has a Yin release as a chakra nature (though she might also have Lightning Release, but in anime only). Sakura, second to Tsunade, has none.

Aside from that, just some inconsistencies with her stats and description. It says here that,  ''" During the Academy, she mostly focused on her studies, and less on trainings, which affected her physical performance. Studying hard, she has developed an excellent logical inference and began to give special attention to details. Due to these she doesn’t participate very much physically in mission, but only looks for solutions to solve problems." ''But looking at her stats she seems pretty strong to me, with 4 strength, 2.5 taijutsu and 2 stamina. But it's probably just a mistake/miscalculation on the author's part.

So all in all, all that hodge podge of power into someone who's supposed to be a 15-17 year old chunin.

That's about it, aside from what I've said in my comment before. Maya's abilities, now that I've taken a good look, are waaaay OP. Her background and personality are great though. Well-rounded, and they both tie in nicely with each other.