User blog:Emo Russian Awesomeness/Is this Kekkai Genkai too powerful?????

Ok...I have two clans, Nakagawa and Takashoma and I need to know if their Kekkai Genkai's are to powerful before I post Asami and Katana....

Here's the first one..Island paradise....(I don't know what it is in Jappanese)

'''Abilities: Asami reads the targets' inner desires and puts their minds in an island illusion reflecting that desire. Their bodies are paralyzed, giving Asami time to wound the targets, or heal herself. The illusion, depending on the user's skill can have flaws (allowing the target to break the illusion). Asami has had lots of training and is very skilled in gen-jutsu, so she can control what goes on in each the targets' separate world. Her usually blue eyes go pale white and she passes into a deep sleep. She only does this when she knows there is someone to watch her body for her. Those with Byakugan or Sharingan can see through the illusion. If the target doesn't have Byakugan or Sharingan, there are other ways to break free, a very strong will, virtual suicide, killing a person in the fantasy, trauma, the user doesn't have the strength to hold the illusion forever so you could just wait (the longest an illusion has been held up is 2 hours in real time and a week illusion time), or the user dies (there's a 50% chance of that happening). This ability is very perilous to the user and most of the Nakagawa clan don't live past 50. So they usually don't try to intentionally use it. The technique can't be taught but Asami has been able to teach a select few of the Akatsuki how to read desires. Appearance: The target gets a blank look on their face and they can't move. Their mind takes some damage depending how weak-willed they are and how much time is spent in their little world.'''

Katana's is the same but with fear.....

'''Kat reads the targets' fears, paralyzes the opponent and puts them into a deep sleep. It's the opposite of the Island Paradise instead of their own happy desires, the targets' are put into a nightmare. And just like Island Paradise, this could kill the user. It has the same strengths and weaknesses. Just like a Nakagawa can teach others to read desires, a Takashima can teach others to read fears.'''