Talk:Himitsu Yoake/@comment-25156300-20141105001347

Well, I can see why you liked reading about Kazō. You've got an amputee too XD

I like the story. Not too many people make a character that stops being a ninja. Even the part with Orochimaru seems realistic, with her never really seeing him and making weapons... and not becoming one of his experiments (like every other OC that's with him)

The kekkei genkai is interesting, but that sounds like a BIG drawback for the speed and vision. How much lifespan is lost when it is used for, say, 10 minutes and turned off?

You mentioned traps... is that what's in the picture? It looks like she's manipulating electrical wires. And the wires used as her nerves is cool too.

Overall, good work with her :)