Talk:Yoko "Izayoi" Minesaki/@comment-5301066-20121011162514

I think u just need to balance two things:

1. Her love for Itachi and Sasuke, its a bit...OOC of them.

2. Her angel-scan or whtever it is, it's a bit overpowered and therefore making it a mary-sue, lol i know i know, an OC being called a mary sue doesnt make us a great critique but it will help you to improve ur OC.