Talk:Akira Kazue/@comment-27797386-20150606190453/@comment-26252910-20150607210918

Thankyou! Are there any bits that are too close to cliché in here? I've tried to avoid it, but I have some bad history with Mary Sue's (never written a story with them, but I've made I few), so I'm not all that confident that I haven't messed up again with Akira. =)