Talk:Sakuya Fujikami/@comment-35391058-20180424033129

Hello,

I really like the background of this character! However:

I think it would suit her better if her family moved to Suna after moving to Konoha. I realize that Konoha is a very plausible option due to geography but his father being single and her family in need of financial resources I think it would be great idea if the Sand recognized her Clan's talents and invited her family to Suna, promising them financial security (as Sand is always in need of reinforcements). This is veery believable, plausibe and makes her backgound even more unique and interesting! :)

I also do not think that she needs any major connection to the canon characters, at least not from the Hidden Leaf. She's that interesting! :) It's great that she's a medical ninja that also uses wind fans, but her "inspired by Tsunade" part was a bit off in terms of timing.. She should have been inspired by Tsunade before the Third World War as Tsunade took part as a medical ninja in the Second World War as well. You can attribute this to her meeting Tsunade or something along those lines... Maybe meeting her in the Academy whilst Tsunade taught the class about medical ninjutsu? I like her personality. It needs a bit more "steel" as she is a ninja and I think living in the desert could bring that into her personality. Also I'd also consider her post-war life very carefully: She had lived in 3 different villages, which one does she choose at the end? I always had this idea that after the war is done Naruto and the Leaf put great effort in rebuilding the Uzushiogakure in honor of the Uzumakis and the friendship between villages. Maybe she could also actively take part in that endevour? And then later she could settle there as she would have dedicated a lot of her life to the village... She would also have earned a lot of recognition and great reputation for her efforts I would imagine...

All in all, you character is one of the better ones on here and all this suggestions are not meant as criticism, they rather are suggestions for improvement. I only bothered to write this much out because I really think that your character is interesting enough to stand on her own and walk her own path rather than cling to the canon characters as so many of the original characters do on here... I do not mean to spoil your fun! If you are happy with her story so far than that's all that matters and if this comment did not change your mind or give you any new ideas and inspirations then hey, at least now you are more convinced that your version of her is the best one! :) It's all in pursuit of improving your character! ;)